Wednesday, January 27, 2016

An Analysis of the Narrative Structure of J. R. R. Tolkien's Snow White and the Seven Dwarves

Within the boundaries of the physical world, humanity is confined to forming opinions of their contemporaries based solely on their observed behaviors; the contrasting corollary to this is that we judge ourselves through our intentions. However, by judging others simply by what they've done, we limit ourselves to narrow viewpoints that often fail to fully encompass the entirety of situations. Writers of literature, fictional or otherwise, provide an avenue of enhanced understanding through exposure of their characters' innermost thoughts, feelings, and emotions. By utilizing this method of narrative, the reader is able to observe unfolding events in a unique perspective and a better immersive experience.


And what about my wife and my fortune, you mangy dogs! I'll show you. Just
wait. How I'd like to see now the look you'll have in your eyes. It would give me respect
for beetles, scorpions, and worms, you vermin. Damn the man who lets himself be
carried away by the melodious voice of woman. But Said nodded in agreement.

One of the sycophants said, "Your daughter is in safe hands with her mother.
According to the law a six- year-old girl should stay with her mother. If you like, I could
bring her to visit you every week."

Egyptian author Naguib Mahfouz's "Thief and the Dogs" (  اللص والكلاب ) is written in the narrative mode of streams of consciousness, the first of its kind encountered in Arabic literature, wherein the speaker's thought processes are depicted within the text. Drifting between internal monologuing, soliloquys, and a third person view, we bear witness not only to the travails and hardships being physically undergone, but also to main character Said Mahran's raging inner conflict, turmoil, and hateful conviction as he attempts to revenge himself upon those he perceived to have done him wrong. Employing literary techniques that saves "Thief and the Dogs" from fading into obscurity, Mahfouz skilfully fleshes out the otherwise one-dimensional plot line and characters into an existentialist piece that actively provokes independent thought from its readers.


"There'll be terror, now, he told himself, in the middle of pleasure, and joy will
suddenly vanish but it's no fault of yours: chaos and confusion envelop us all like the
vault of the sky. Didn't Rauf Ilwan used to say that our intentions were good, but we
lacked order or discipline?" 

Naguib's characterization of Said is only possible through the narrative alternating between third person viewpoints and his interior monologues. Writing in this manner is an effective way to see what is going through our protagonist's head, what makes him tick, and grants license to form a connection with his personality whilst simultaneously providing insight into his humanity, or lack thereof. As such, at least in regards to his character or his plight, we are better able to sympathize, empathize, or detest him altogether.

Although highly effective when appropriately utilized, a piece written using streams of consciousness is vulnerable to certain flaws. The vivid descriptions of Said's mannerisms, thought processes, and moral character all paint a detailed portrait of the man, but the entirety of the novel is perceived through the eyes of Said, and no other; thus, most of the information is presented with his bias, rather than from unprejudiced sources that would provide an alternative view of events. The plot is also prone to possible incomprehensibility, stemming from the rapid alternating between reality and monologue blurring the message originally meant by Naguib. Furthermore, the lack of variability in viewpoints prevents the reader from forming an informed conclusion based on an analysis of the broader picture. 

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  2. You've done a good job there. I can see connections between the use of stream of consciousness techniques and the story. Examples that you provide are also supported with insightful analysis.

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  3. Great job bruv, a real entertaining read!
    p.s i'm pretty sure it's 'stream' of consciousness and not 'streams,' so you might wanna get your facts straight ;)

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